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Frostbite. Rules could use some proofreads!

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Thu, 10/29/2015 - 11:54
mulletsquirrel
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Hello everybody!

It's been a few months since I've been active on BGDF. That's only because I found out about The Game Crafter and have been working super hard on a game design to print through them soon.

I'd like to get as many eyes on the rules as I can before I start to "pretty them up" and get ready to publish. Any comments or criticism is appreciated!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/14hOF6bZnI39AF-hYPLdP8e4VoYKl6J_765_M...

Also, here is a link to my website: http://www.neanderthalgames.com/

Thanks!
Darrek

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Thu, 10/29/2015 - 13:31
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Looking pretty good. I see a

Looking pretty good. I see a lot of good edit suggestions so far.

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Thu, 10/29/2015 - 21:54
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check out this thread

Since you've used google doc, I suggest you get KeshieKay to read them...

Check out this thread

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Sat, 10/31/2015 - 16:37
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Thanks

Thanks for the shout-out, Rich. :)

Re: the rules, make sure your formatting is consistent (if you capitalize it one place, capitalize it everywhere). I made a few comments here & there, but overall it looks good.

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Mon, 11/02/2015 - 10:45
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Thanks for the feedback

Thanks for the feedback everybody! And thanks for forwarding to keshiekay Rich! I'm getting super excited to get this game polished!

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Thu, 11/05/2015 - 11:37
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Images

If anybody is interested, here is a link to some images from the game pieces and also some images of game play in progress!

https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0B9qMtCPn9LapNUNwbUotN29uYTQ&usp=...

Darrek

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