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Pedal Beach 2 player pnp, please browse and comment

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Chad Russell
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Hello again designers! I have possible finished redesigning a 2 player card game i designed some time ago. It has new rules, graphics, added cards and theme.
files can be found here:
http://ge.tt/3Kab5kD2?c
Updated rules can also be found in download below. Look forward to any insite, thanks again
- Chad

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Silly question, but I've not

Silly question, but I've not done a PnP before, so, what does one need to do to print it exactly?

If you're wanting a playtester I'll be happy to try it out! I read over the instructions. The background may be a little to busy for my taste, atleast on the computer screen. It hurt my eyes a little.

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For print and play just download the file you would like to try, especially the card face file. You can print it at home on 8 1/2" x 11" card stock which will be 8 pages. The game is 72 cards total.

Another option is to put it in a flash drive and bring it to someplace such as Staples and they can print a copy. If you would like to print the backs on the cards you have to be careful to load the pages correctly.

If you are afraid of messing up the fronts and back it is possible to print them separately, cut and put them together in sleeves. You will want to mark cut lines on the back in this case to make cards 2 1/2" by 3 1/2", 9 cards per page.

As far as the background of the rules,(the water)I can make another file with a plain white background if you would like, not a problem. I updated numbers of the cards and rules cards as some of them were backwards,very sorry about that.

Feel free to playtest if you like. If it seems like a sturdy game,i will look into publishing this one.
Thank you IcePeddlerGames for the interest, really appreciate it. -Chad

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First, this needs some

First, this needs some serious reformatting work in order to be comfortably readable. Also can I suggest please using another font?

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-vW2v72ZwNeWnR6UnFvT3g1NUU&authuser=0

Above is my mark up doc. The circled letters are expanded upon below:

A. REWORD TO SOMETHING LIKE:
4 Hazard Cards, 4 Swerve Cards, and 4 Trophy

>>>>>>Right now it reads as if you have 12 hazard cards--swerves, trophys, and...?

B. REWORD TO SOMETHING LIKE:
Separate the cards into 5 decks:
1. Player 1 Right Pedals
2. Player 1 Left Pedals
3. Player 2 Right Pedals
4. Player 2 Left Pedals
5. Goals

Set the trophy cards aside.
Shuffle a swerve card to each pedal deck and 2-4 hazards to the goal deck and place all decks face down.

Flip 2 Goal Cards face up and place one to the left and one to the right of the deck.

>>>>>Right now it reads as if you are setting out a pile for player 1 goals but not player 2 goals. V. Confusing.

C. REFORMAT
During each turn, a player can...?
Note to use left right hands either not necessary or should be mentioned sooner.
Where does the collection pile go? First time you've mentioned this.

Chad Russell
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Thank you CPontrel

I will look closely to your suggestions and revise, appreciate your input! As far as using right hand for right pedal and left hand for the left, it is a thematic choice. I wanted players to use both hands, just as you would use both feet while peddling a bicycle. Thanks -Chad

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Chad:

I'm a bit tied this weekend but next weekend I'd be happy to PnP and sit w/ our group to give this a few run thoroughs. Just drop me a line.

Cheers
Jon

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