Hello,
Could someone check out my website and proofread my rule book for my TCG Two-Sided Mirror? Any kind of feedback, advice and constructive comments are welcome. The website is still being worked on by me and a few friends but I would love to know what you guys think of it so far. The documents are in PDF format but if you would like them in another format, let me know.
Are the rules clear? Do they make sense? Is the format and flow of the rule book natural? Is there too much irrelevant information? Too long? Etc.
Is the website easy to navigate? Visually appealing? Enough/too much information? Grammar flaws? Is the website layout easy to follow?
Website is here:
http://www.lombergames.com/
I couldn't attach a copy of the rules (1.01 MB size, .01 MB too big) but you can download a copy of the rules off the website here: http://www.lombergames.com/full-rules.html
Thank you!
Thank you for your feedback. While reading it, I thought about how I could do that and I think I have some ideas.