I would like to request any input on my Kickstarter preview page. What's missing? What is wrong? What can be improved?
Keep in mind I am currently awaiting my prototype copy so more images of the game are on the way (including in the Contents image .. that big space at the bottom).
Thank you in advance!
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/iwillnevergrowup/1534167851?token=e...
Set to go live May 3rd, 2016 for a 28 day campaign.
Also, updated preview rules PDF has been posted to www.iwillnevergrowup.com/publishing/intotheblack for anyone interested.
Thematically, it sounds interesting, the tone and overall presentation play well. I don't know CAD to US convrsions so hard to know my cost.
I'd want to know something about the amount of playtesting. And I'd really, really need to see action shots of the prototype in play.
Current conversion puts it at about $32-35 USD.
There will definitely be action shots and a playthrough video. Like I said, I'm waiting on my professional prototype to arrive before I can do that.