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Monaco: 1929 (Box art version 4)

Monaco: 1929 (Box art version 4)

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Looks good. The colors are

Looks good. The colors are appealing. The wheel placement is much improved. Smoke is still out of place though, not stylized like the rest.

To Soulfinger

I'm probably going to try and put less detail in the smoke and see how that looks, maybe without the small white parts and instead just the outline.

Disclaimer: I am not an art

Disclaimer: I am not an art guy. I know nothing of color schemes. Take every piece of feedback I give with a grain of salt. With that being said ..

I had trouble identifying the smoke until the third iteration, and then I really had to look at it which isn't necessarily a bad thing.

I really like the way you have done the wheels. I had trouble telling what was going on in previous iterations.

I like this one as well, but

I like this one as well, but I think identifying the smoke was easy enough. the difficult part was (and still is, I think, though now it is impossible for me to 'unsee' it) seeing that the rear wheel is flying away.

To Dagar

Sorry for the slow reply, I've been a tad busy past couple of weeks.

Maybe I could have the wheel rolling along the ground or that sort of thing?

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