Seems clear and logical to me. The layout is good and you also explain the TURN PHASES in this version of the rulebook.
It's very presentable and looks very good, if not AMAZING!
Good on you for perfecting such a CLEAR document with LESS white space and maybe a bit smaller size ... It is never-the-less well done and very understandable. And you've achieved all that content in LESS pages than before. That's what is most impressive. Streamlining the instructions and making the game's rule as CLEAR AS DAY!
Congratulations, those rules are at the Pinnacle of "Quality"!
Cordially.
Note #1: Here is the URL/Link to the improved rulebook. I pasted it here... Because it was at the bottom of the 2nd Page in terms of comments. I felt it would be better HERE at the TOP of the comments:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/189CJGSmlb5N7PGdV43TVyNrj6colkUHe/view?u...


