Still looking for help to review my game!

Hi Zodiak Team and thanks for sharing your rules with us.

While I did not playtest your game, I did read the rules manual. Here are my thoughts:

* Overall, I thought that the manual was nice. Everyone has their own sense of style so I will not comment on the styling.

* Something to take into consideration is that the silhouette of the henchman meeple looks an awful lot like an old-fashioned keyhole, such as on the cover. This might give some people the wrong impression that this is a thief game (Oh, a keyhole with an exclamation point in it! Kind of a stealthy-thief action game!) when it is something other then that.

* Overall, one aspect that causes me some amount of confusion in a lot of rule sets is when people introduce terms without defining them first, such as on page 1 when Super Jerk cards are mentioned but not explained. A lot of card game players will likely read between the lines but I could see someone saying to themselves, "Super Jerk cards? What are those? Why haven't I heard of those before? What else am I supposed to know about them?" It's minor, you probably won't hear much about it but you should know about it if there are other similar such concerns that surface (The meeple sort of dovetails into that as well... "A Meeple is included in the set? How many meeples are there supposed to be in this game?")

* At the beginning, you may want to list the supplies that are included with the game so that people could see if they have the entire game (ex. 40 Job cards, 25 Tell Da Boss cards, etc.). You may also want to state the range of players for the game (2-4 players, 3-5 players, etc. - You provided some of that information in your post).

* On Page 2, there is an awkwardly-phrased sentence: "Each action can be used to in any combination of the following:". I'm guessing that the "to" shouldn't be there. Not a big complaint but I thought that you should know about it.

* On Page 4, the use of the word "Ca$h" (and, specifically, using the "$" to substitute for "s") might be a little confusing for some. I know that it is semantics but perhaps you could write something to the effect, "This icon represents money (called "Ca$h" in the game)..." Again, not a big complaint.

* On Page 11, all I saw was a black outline of a rectangular box with "Page 11" on the inside of that box. It might just be my PDF reader, though.

I don't want this to sound all negative; It isn't. I'm trying to approach this manual from the perspective of someone who both hasn't played this game before and who also might not be familiar with card games in general.

Again, thank you for allowing us to read your rules manual.

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