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Rulebook Help - Does this thing make sense?

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Gabe
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NGO Box cropped 2.jpg

So, after a great deal of playtesting and tweaking, I believe my game is finally ready for blind playtesting.

The game is called NGO, and it's a city building game for 2-3 players. It's about rebuilding a city after a natural disaster.

Would you mind reading through my 5 page rulebook? Does everything make sense?

Rulebook can be found here:
http://www.bettermissions.com/wp-content/uploads/2016/05/NGO-Rules-Compl...

Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated. Thanks for your help.

polyobsessive
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Nice work

That's a good and clear looking rulebook you can be proud of. I have sent you a PM with more detailed feedback.

Rob

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Looks very clean and concise,

Looks very clean and concise, and the artwork is beautiful! You may want to enlist the sanity check from The Game Crafter after getting some reviews here; I trust them for a final check as they're sure to point out some possibly meaningful observations.

I'll give the rules another read-through and see if anything comes to mind...good job though!

Gabe
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@chris_mancini That's a

@chris_mancini

That's a really good idea. It's like paying an editor to go through a manuscript, and I think they do a good job over at TGC.

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Hi Gabe. This looks really

Hi Gabe. This looks really high quality to me. The illustrations fit the rules really well.

Under setup, I'm a little confused at the difference between the 2 meeples in 4 and the wooden token in 5. I'm guessing the confusion is on my end, but I'm not sure.

Looks like a really fun and well thought out game. Good luck!

Gabe
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Ok. I should probably clarify

Ok. I should probably clarify it's a wooden disc to make it more specific.

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