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Feedback Window Pains Sell Sheet

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Juzek
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Could I get some feedback on my first sell sheet? I plan on sending it in to Gamewright.

I worry it may be too cluttered and not descriptive enough about the actual game.

Let me know any thoughts. All comments are appreciated

Thanks in advance

Juzek
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I don't like the file upload

I don't like the file upload junk. Here's a jpg
https://www.bgdf.com/image/window-pains-sell-sheet-0

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Quote:Genera: Family light

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Genera: Family light strategy

I'm not sure what this means or what to do with it as a reader. I'd remove that and expand the box next to it so it doesn't feel so cramped.
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Games are neck and neck

I also don't know what to do with this. I'm not going to buy a game based on whether or not games are neck and neck, whatever that actually means.. Players never get far ahead? That sounds more like a limitation than a feature, because it implies less strategic play.

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craftsmen

Consider a gender-neutral version of this. "Crafters" or "artisans" perhaps.
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Mechanics

There's a little space here, so I'd put "Light strategy" here, in the first position.

The photos are good.

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@Jay103

Thanks!

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