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fruitlesseffort
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Hello,

I have been working on a card and dice game for awhile now, in between working and kids etc. Its been play tested a bit and am doing more as I can find the time and the people. Although I am still not 100% sure what to do with it (the initial idea was p&p) I read somewhere that its always worth trying out with publishers and that a sell sheet was the way to go. So here it is.

Rather than give any information on the game at the moment, I thought I would see how well the sheet does at putting across the important info. I would really appreciate feedback on it if possible.

Thanks in advance!

Isaac Flores
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This looks great.

I'm no game publisher or anything so keep that in mind. I would try to squeeze in there what FEED and EVENT cards do. Maybe even have a picture of each type of card, but size them down of course to fit. But that's like what, 5 types of cards? Other than those two things, the presentation looks phenomenal and I'm super stoked for you to find a publisher.
Maybe get with a local board game store (if you have it packaged) and see if they can sell it, just to see what more people think of it.

fruitlesseffort
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Thanks for the feedback. I

Thanks for the feedback. I like the idea of showing the different cards so will try to work that into the page in some way. I was going to start looking at how to package/box it up when I next have some free time. I have no idea how much these things cost! Thanks again for the advice.

Momtoast
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Spelling errors

Also be sure to spell check and proofread the daylights out of this thing. If this works anything like submitting a resume or book pitch, you will need to have it top notch.

Monster is misspelled in the first square of text on the bottom left. That's just the one that stood out to me.

Otherwise, this looks like fun. I love the art design and such, and it sounds like a fun card twist on King of Tokyo. Good luck!

fruitlesseffort
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I usually get my wife to

I usually get my wife to check everything before putting it out there. However she was too busy last night and I wanted to start getting feedback as soon as possible.

It will be correctly checked and edited before version 2!

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