Use this thread to post constructive critiques of the entries to the July 2008 GDS Challenge, entitled "Pool Party" ( found here ).
-Bryk
Use this thread to post constructive critiques of the entries to the July 2008 GDS Challenge, entitled "Pool Party" ( found here ).
-Bryk
Just a quick note that I wasn't exactly happy with Pool War, particularly the incidental nature most members of the group have in the game, but it was the best I could think of; and that I'll provide comments on the other entries if I ever manage to find my notes which I'm sure I saved somewhere... (Well, I'll probably provide comments on the other entries anyway, but I'll be annoyed and they'll probably be of lower quality if they're not based on those notes)
Also - My congratulations to The Mob.

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Critique posted by Isamoor on the old site: