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Jolt! - An arena based board game

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browwnrob
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Hi guys,

Ive just finished my rulebook for my game following some playtesting but about to try blind playtesting.

Its an arena based board game where the board shrinks in size. Its set in the future and incvolves mechs trying to push each other out of the arena. Ive attached a PDF of the rules.

I tried to get away from using the term "hexes" but not sure if the term "contest zone" is too clunky... but its a minor point.

Anyway have a look and see what you guys think.

Ive made a Facebook page for the game which has't very much on it as yet but its early days!

https://www.facebook.com/JOLTgame/

Ive attached some images of my rough prototype so apologies for the poor quality!

Thanks!

browwnrob
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Hey, Does anyone have any

Hey,

Does anyone have any thoughts on the game, theme or rules?

Thanks,

Fertessa
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browwnrob wrote:Hey, Does

browwnrob wrote:
Hey,

Does anyone have any thoughts on the game, theme or rules?

Thanks,

I started to read the rules, but that is an intimidating block of text. I can't comment on their cohesion, but I can say, design-wise, your rules are not easy on the eyes. It would help to break it up with some images, to add more white space, to have bigger, eye-catching headers that make it easy to skim for what you want to read. I will try to give them a more thorough look later this week.

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Hi, I think your rules could

Hi,

I think your rules could benefit from a bit of re-ordering of information. For example if I understand correctly, Power-Up cards are played at the START of a player's turn. However, there is no mention of Power-Up cards until the final section on actions. They are not - I believe - even listed as an action. I suppose this is because taking one is not a choice but a fixed part of your turn. If that's the case, you should probably talk about that before going on to describe the Action choices.

Everything else looked fairly clear from a skim through. As far as layout goes, I would avoid wrapping around images. It doesn't make it easier to follow.

Also, while I understand why you inserted some text-boxes with bits of fun/flavour/lore/atmosphere/strategic hints - it might be worth leaving them out just because there's enough to read already. :) I'd be inclined to have them all on the back page to make it clear that they are optional reading and not necessary for digesting the rules. Apocetha did something similar.

How did the test-playing go? Did anyone suggest an alternative to the dice rolling? I have no objection to dice (I love Risk), but it looks like you can lose the game on a failed roll (when Jumping?) which might be a bit of an "Oh...damn. Ok. I guess that's me done then" feeling? (If an entire amassed army in Risk could be wiped out at the throw of a die, I probably wouldn't be a fan.) Could you use power cards for movement and jumping instead of dice? Just an uninformed suggestion since I haven't played it. :)

Hope that's of some use.

browwnrob
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Hey guys thanks for the

Hey guys thanks for the feedback it's very useful and makes sense. My wife is going to help rearrange the rulebook :)

Regarding the dice, I was thinking the game could be perceived as a bit dry and abstract so was on the fence and added in the dice to incorporate a small random element but I did think the same thing in that you could end up losing on an unlucky roll.

Moving on from that it could work if I incorporated the jump mechanism into the power up deck, say by having a number of jump cards. A jump card would allow you to jump 2 spaces but and to jump additional spaces you would need to play an additional jump card. For bigger jumps it would cause bigger pressure rating changes.

It would make for interesting strategy i.e. Do I sacrifice some position now and draw power up cards now before they all get taken so I can get out of trouble later on.

Do you think the game looks fun?

Tim Edwards
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browwnrob wrote:Hey guys

browwnrob wrote:
Hey guys thanks for the feedback it's very useful and makes sense. My wife is going to help rearrange the rulebook :)

Regarding the dice, I was thinking the game could be perceived as a bit dry and abstract so was on the fence and added in the dice to incorporate a small random element but I did think the same thing in that you could end up losing on an unlucky roll.

Moving on from that it could work if I incorporated the jump mechanism into the power up deck, say by having a number of jump cards. A jump card would allow you to jump 2 spaces but and to jump additional spaces you would need to play an additional jump card. For bigger jumps it would cause bigger pressure rating changes.

It would make for interesting strategy i.e. Do I sacrifice some position now and draw power up cards now before they all get taken so I can get out of trouble later on.

Do you think the game looks fun?

Yes, I think that kind of card play would be really nice. I mean, there IS still an element of luck because you're not sure what you will draw (or if you ARE allowed to choose your card, at least you don't know what your opponent(s) are holding.)

It looks like it could be fun. I like arenas on principle. :)

browwnrob
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Hey guys, thanks again for

Hey guys, thanks again for the feedback.

I have tried to space things out a little better and have removed the dice mechanic for Jumping.

I have updated my original attachment to include Version 1.1

Let me know what you think!

Angrycyborggames
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Hello! Good luck with your

Hello! Good luck with your project. The hex style and future-ism reminds me a bit of one of my favourites, neuroshima hex.

Here’s a few things on my first read:

- “during game setup, the pressure sensor rating can be changed if agreed upon by all players” this seems like a pretty critical part of the gameplay and the designer should control this. I don’t think your readers need permission to houserule something, instead you should set the value to what produces the best games.

- page 6 graphic is confusing — says 2 movement, but one arrow indicates a single jump. You should consider using two arrows to demonstrate each action as independent (if this is what you are going for)

- endgame condition seems a bit funky. How do I determine if mechs can’t jump far enough? Is a two tile barrier too much? Three? The action cards are hidden (if I understand correctly), so I have to reveal what I am holding to debate whether or not we end the game... this might need to be cleaned up?

Overall thoughts: I like the theme and the idea a lot. The constantly constraining battlefield provides a lot of tension ala battle royale style games. I think there’s something there and I think it could be very cool. However I worry this game would have too much board upkeep for me and my partner to enjoy, so I would probably pass unless there is an easier way to track all that information or you find a way to make things more cohesive.

An example would be the action points system — is there a way to simplify this so it’s less of a “you have 3 ap, spend 1 to do this thing, 2 to do that, 1 to do this and this, 3 for this...” and maybe something simpler like: pick two actions for this turn move, attack, mod, jump, use action card, draw action card etc)

Because right now there is a lot of mental / board upkeep: AP, hex thresholds, mod management, and then the usual weight for decisions during board games. And, of course, a timer.

Edit;— lastly, on your cards at the back, the text needs to be more readable. 1D6 looks like 1176, and there’s a few other hard to read things. I’d recommend a cleaner font for errata text like that

browwnrob
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Hey thank you so much for

Hey thank you so much for giving feedback, I really appreciate it!

Regarding your points I have to say I would agree with all of them, apart from the one where you would pass on it but that's something that I hopefully can fix following excellent feedback! It's good to get more opinions as I think it's easy for me to get tunnel vision. I'm learning a lot here which is the main thing and if I get a great game at the end then that's a bonus.

I'm really glad that you picked up on the battle royale thing as that's my whole angle.

Regarding the AP, one other idea I had was that there was the list of available actions but instead of being weighted as they currently are, you still have 3 points to spend, but performing any action costs 1AP, but performing it again would cost a further 2AP essentially perform 3 single actions or 1 action twice... If that makes sense?

I initially strayed from that idea as I thought weighted AP values would lend itself better to play test tweaking but taking your suggestion a little further now I'm thinking the actions could be like:

Move up to 2 hexes
Place / Replace a mod
Adjust the pressure of adjacent hexes twice
Rotate a mod up to 2 increments
Draw power up cards
Jolt another mech
Perform a jump

So i can move 4 hexes to get me out of trouble or I can move two, jolt someone then try a jump but blow two of my jump cards.

Do you think that's another decision too many?

The timer I had in to simulate the tension and quick thinking and also as I dislike analysis paralysis I did toy with the idea of keeping it there and like codenames, if someone gets fed up waiting for your turn they flip the timer. But that could cause a whole different type of battle royale :)

Angrycyborggames
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I think those are all good

I think those are all good ideas and worth testing out — I’d just add that keep in mind my feedback is very different than most designers here as I tend to prefer (very) light weight systems compared to a lot of other designs here.

For something I think of being too complex, most others might think it’s very simple!

I’d say give it a few plays and go with what feels the best.

browwnrob
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Thanks man, Ive reworded the

Thanks man,

Ive reworded the tiebreak section to say

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At the end of the game, there may be an obstructed path to allow your mech to engage with an opposing mech due to the formation of isolated islands of connected zones. When opposing mechs are isolated like this, if no mechs make any attempt to engage after 3 rounds (i.e. jump to the same “island” as an opposing mech, perform a jolt action on or move adjacent to an opposing mech), the game is decided by a tiebreaker.

In a tiebreak, the winner is declared as the tied player who eliminated the most mechs. If this is a tie then the tied player with the most mechs remaining in the arena is the winner. If this is a tie the tied player who has a mech on the largest island is the winner.

Id like to add a final tiebreaker to say something like, if its still a tie after all that, the player who is most likely to hack the government databases is the winner :)

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